Tuesday, 24 August 2004
German Trial Exam; Writing Component
Question 13
a) You have witnessed an incident in the school playground. Write a recount of the events to give to the Deputy Principle.
Fraulein Schneider,
Diese Woche habe ich etwas im Schulhof bemerkt. In der kleinen Pause sieht alles ganz normal aus. Aber in der Mittagspause spielten die Kinder von der siebten Klasse ein bestimmtes Spiel. Es sah wie etwas von einem Horrorfilm aus. Die meisten Kinder spielten als normale Menschen; einige als Polizei, und eine kleine Gruppe spielte aus "Dracula".
Bis Halbzeit saren die meisten "Zombies", und die "Menschen" schrien und versteckten sich. Die "Polizei" versuchen, die unsterblichen "Zombies" zu töten.
Aber die bestimmte Kinder waren die "Dracula" Kinder. Sie haben tatsächlich begonnen, die andere Kinder zu beissen, um ihre Blut zu trinken. Ich habe es mit meinen eigene Augen gesehen. Heute hat einen Jongen versucht, mein Blut zu trinken!
Gestern haben einige "Polizei" imitatione Waffe zur Schule mitgebracht, und vier Kinder waren verletzt. Sie waren "Zombies"; an ihre Hälse war Beisskratzer, und die "Menschen" hatten sie vergrabt.
Dieser Speil ist gefährlich. Sie müssen etwas machen, bevor die Kinder echte Waffen oder Messer in die Schule bringen; bevore jemand wirklich tot ist!
Talli, von der achten Klasse
Teacher's comment: (I know it was Friday 13th, but this story is a bit beyond belief!)
Mark: 3/6
Translation of Question 13a) response
Ms Schneider,
This week, I have noticed something on the school playground. During the short break, everything seemed totally normal. But during midday break, the children from the seventh grade played a particular game. It looked like something out of a horror movie. Most children played as normal "People"; some as "Police", and a small group played as "Dracula".
By half time, most were "Zombies", and the "People" were screaming and hiding themselves. The "Police" sought ways to kill the undead "Zombies".
But the most interesting group were the "Dracula" children. They had actually begun to bite other children, in order to drink their blood. I saw it with my own eyes. Today a boy tried to drink my blood!
Yesterday, a few "Police" brought imitation weapons to school, and four children were injured. They were "Zombies"; there were bite marks on their throats, and the "People" had buried them.
This game is dangerous. You must do something before the children bring real weapons or knives to school, before someone really dies!
Talli, from the eighth grade
a) You have witnessed an incident in the school playground. Write a recount of the events to give to the Deputy Principle.
Fraulein Schneider,
Diese Woche habe ich etwas im Schulhof bemerkt. In der kleinen Pause sieht alles ganz normal aus. Aber in der Mittagspause spielten die Kinder von der siebten Klasse ein bestimmtes Spiel. Es sah wie etwas von einem Horrorfilm aus. Die meisten Kinder spielten als normale Menschen; einige als Polizei, und eine kleine Gruppe spielte aus "Dracula".
Bis Halbzeit saren die meisten "Zombies", und die "Menschen" schrien und versteckten sich. Die "Polizei" versuchen, die unsterblichen "Zombies" zu töten.
Aber die bestimmte Kinder waren die "Dracula" Kinder. Sie haben tatsächlich begonnen, die andere Kinder zu beissen, um ihre Blut zu trinken. Ich habe es mit meinen eigene Augen gesehen. Heute hat einen Jongen versucht, mein Blut zu trinken!
Gestern haben einige "Polizei" imitatione Waffe zur Schule mitgebracht, und vier Kinder waren verletzt. Sie waren "Zombies"; an ihre Hälse war Beisskratzer, und die "Menschen" hatten sie vergrabt.
Dieser Speil ist gefährlich. Sie müssen etwas machen, bevor die Kinder echte Waffen oder Messer in die Schule bringen; bevore jemand wirklich tot ist!
Talli, von der achten Klasse
Teacher's comment: (I know it was Friday 13th, but this story is a bit beyond belief!)
Mark: 3/6
Translation of Question 13a) response
Ms Schneider,
This week, I have noticed something on the school playground. During the short break, everything seemed totally normal. But during midday break, the children from the seventh grade played a particular game. It looked like something out of a horror movie. Most children played as normal "People"; some as "Police", and a small group played as "Dracula".
By half time, most were "Zombies", and the "People" were screaming and hiding themselves. The "Police" sought ways to kill the undead "Zombies".
But the most interesting group were the "Dracula" children. They had actually begun to bite other children, in order to drink their blood. I saw it with my own eyes. Today a boy tried to drink my blood!
Yesterday, a few "Police" brought imitation weapons to school, and four children were injured. They were "Zombies"; there were bite marks on their throats, and the "People" had buried them.
This game is dangerous. You must do something before the children bring real weapons or knives to school, before someone really dies!
Talli, from the eighth grade
